Guitar Shop New York

By admin, February 7, 2010 6:09 pm

What do you think of these lyrics?

This is a bit of a song I’ve written I’m 14 years old and sing and play guitar grade 5, piano grade 4, drums grade 5. Please be honest…it’s only a little bit of the song…

Take me back to

The bright lights of new york city
Where we wandered around shops saying isn’t that pretty
I remember all that

When the phone would ring and I knew it was you
Cause you always rang at half past two
And I still can’t believe that we are through
So take me back

We got to the hotel but I’d forgot the keys
Then it started to rain and you looked at me
But I forgot it all when I looked into your eyes

You said let’s wander off see where we go
Made it more exciting coz we didn’t know
Strolling under a starry sky

Those are very sweet, melancholy lyrics. Keep it up. Music is a great thing to spend time creating. Best of luck.
P.S. I like your nose.

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